Nice one Hedvig! Definitely rendering level up. I think you could add some more local temperatures, like warming up the noses and ears. Also, the rimlight feels a bit sloppy, and its hard edge flattens out some of the forms, especially at the redhead's hair and jacket. You could have it bleed in over the form a bit softer. Also, the tangent from the blonde hair at the eye of the redhead is nasty and confuses depth. The eyes and tongue are very nice :)
Thanks for the feedback Johannes! :) I really appreciate it!
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